you say
come
not because i ask you to
not.... because i don't know what else to do
not for me and my unsentimental trivialities
but for the patch of green moss in my yard
under the fig tree
and a lone aster beside
that awaits to see your mouth
chewing a pencil end in concentration
as you sprawl and write
come
because its time
needing someone so bad ....has to be a crime
because its time
needing someone so bad ....has to be a crime
come, not for the silence that seeps every pore
when an ochre august dusk peeps through the door
but for the guttural call of the cicadas
as if imitating the roar in the pit of my stomach
come
for that tug
you know which one
for that tug
you know which one
for mornings laced with the smell of strong coffee
and a toast wanting to burn in your hands
the breeze that refuses to lift the curtain
i am almost certain
it awaits a pair of green eyes
smiling
shrugging
tilting
playing.....watching its each and every anticshrugging
tilting
don't listen to me
but give in to their demands
come now
for the subtle glow from my night lamp
longing to infuse
bathe your skin
for the side of the bed
which you will claim as yours
end their strife
fill up my life
with possibilities
once again
come
because its time
needing someone so much.....so bad
has to be a crime.....
sonny [ all right reserved ]
* ya.....even though i am old fashioned......and would rather have you come....you could put up a mighty good argument if you say that........
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~o0o~
hmmm...intimate verse...love all the touches..the moss in the yard...the guttural call of the cicadas...the longing...the filling life with possibiltiies again...love does this..nice..
ReplyDeleteIt's your art of metaphor that makes you special ...
ReplyDeleteJust to come for no other reason than to come and be with the one you want to be with. Surely a pleasure when you spy them in your view too.
ReplyDeletefor the subtle glow from my night lamp
ReplyDeletelonging to infuse
bathe your skin
for the side of the bed
which you will claim as yours.....intimate and I love all the details.
smiles...this is beautiful sonny....i def want mine to come for the right reason...but i do have a few reasons of my own as well for wanting them to come...nice intimacy...and some playfulness as well which is all part of the game....
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Really beautiful Sonny. It is a pleasure to read.
ReplyDeleteHuggles.
Def a wonderful write Sonny...hmmm...delicious in fact!
ReplyDeleteAnytime...
ReplyDeleteCome, sit with me under the oak
As I chew the pencil end struggling
To find the words to best capture your essence
I fall short.
This is just dripping with longing. It's a lovely romantic plea. How could anyone say no?
ReplyDeletemmm, this feels like a song, i can feel music with it, perhaps something bluesy, a little folk even, definitely unplugged. i really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteah, wonderful. loved your words and images... the longing, so palpable.
ReplyDeletethank you for sharing!
An excellent write, I love your phrasing.
ReplyDeleteyou always carry me away into the moment......
ReplyDeleteA passionate romantic write! Your a wonderful writer :)
ReplyDeleteJust lovely - I love all the different objects calling out! The curtains, the tree--the details of the pencil chewing, etc are especially fun - this is a very sweet romantic poem. k.
ReplyDeleteSonny, this is beautiful, romantic, stirs my heart. Actually, I could see this as a song, accompanied by a guitar!
ReplyDelete"but for the patch of green moss in my yard
ReplyDeleteunder the fig tree
and a lone aster beside
that awaits to see your mouth
chewing a pencil end in concentration
as you sprawl and write"
that is the most wonderful imagery... nice all the way through, and nice play on words.
Wonderful imagery, Sonny.
ReplyDeleteI love this:
"come, not for the silence that seeps every pore
when an ochre august dusk peeps through the door"
A beautiful poem of yearning and ultimate love, of waiting to be fulfilled, with possibilities, and everything else we are seeking embodied in the ever-elusive Other.
ReplyDeleteI love how you created the mood with exquisite sensory details!
ReplyDeletethank you guys....
ReplyDeleteWonderful romantic write - a pleasure to read.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
"for mornings laced with the smell of strong coffee
ReplyDeleteand a toast wanting to burn in your hands
the breeze that refuses to lift the curtain
i am almost certain
it awaits a pair of green eyes"
ooooooooooh yes..............I love it and as some are saying I could hear this as a song, soft, husky voice, the blues, a bit of guitar and maybe a saxophone in between moaning out. *sigh* To have your gift.............